Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Morn Star the Supernatural person

            WHEN THERE WAS TROUBLE IN THE CITY OF New York, the people would call out to one person, Morn Star. Morn Star was always a special baby. When Morn Star was about 2 years old, his parents discovered that Morn Star was strong. He could bust through walls and punch holes in the ground to make the ground shake. Also his hands were like boulders because he they have no feeling and his hands can crush through pretty much anything.  By the time Morn Star was 6 years old he discovered that he couldn’t grow anymore. That was the tallest that Morn Star was going to be.
            By the time he was about 8 years old he learned that he wasn’t afraid of anything. He wasn’t afraid of avalanches or volcanoes. By the time he was 12 years old, Morn Star had the loudest voice that anybody could have. By the time he was 15, Morn star had learned that he was the fastest man in the world. He was so fast that he could race around the world in five seconds. And by the time Morn Star was 18 he figured out that he had no feeling. He knew had no feeling because one day he was using his speed to get to school and he was going to fast and he ran into a wall and didn’t feel anything. He thought it was amazing.
            On Morn Stars birthday the worst that could ever happen on a birthday, happened. There was an evil villain destroying New York City. So Morn Star got to it. When Morn Star got there he realized it was resident evil and he thought that he had destroyed resident evil one time so he couldn’t think of who would replace resident evil. The last time Morn Star faced Resident evil, he was like the terminator because resident evil can only be killed in a certain spot and Morn Star knows were that spot is. And the streets looked like the never ending massacre because there were so many explosions, bullets, blood, and most of the blood was the zombies.
            Morn Star went over closer to Morn Star and before he was 20ft away from resident evil he was surrounded by millions of zombie minions. So Morn Star sliced heads, and used his boulder hands to make a path through the zombies and then used his speed to clear the zombies that were left. So now it was just Morn Star and Resident evil standing eye to eye. When they started fighting Morn Stars legs grew 80ft into the air and then he used his towering legs to crush resident evil. After Morn Star crushed resident evil, Morn Stars legs shrunk down to normal size. Then Morn Star went over to see who replaced resident evil and he saw that it was his BROTHER.

3 comments:

Zebrafish 10 said...

To: Zebrafish12
Hey Great story. There are a few times i cant understand and sometimes it rambles.

From: Zebrafish010

Zebrafish16 said...

Dear Zebrafish#12
Your story has a few typos and your story doesn't have very many details.

zebrafish02 said...

Nice story you had great details!:)But try useing new words not usual ones. from sami